Feedback from our Pitch

     :     2/6 responses said that our music video definitely has potential

: 4/6 said that our music video is on the way to Box Office
                                                                          success.




The elements that work are:
- Good locations and settings
- Image ideology and costume ideas
- Structure of the video as the audience should keep interest
- Use of Goodwin's conventions
- Good animatic
- Good ideas
- Clear target audience
- Good girl band


Things that need developing are:
- To consider saving one of the elements for later on the video so it keeps the audience interested still.
- People in the bar as needs to create an atmosphere
- What will happen in the rapping?
- record label

Things that do not work are:
N/A


I feel happy that we got really positive feedback about our video. We are glad that people understood our girl band and their ideology and liked them also. We are happy also that they picked up on our motif of costume and keeping our band sexy and sophisticated at the same time. We both agree that we should save an element towards the end and decided that keeping the limousine would be exciting to keep until near the end or when one of them starts to rap. 
However, the reason why we do not want people in the bar is because there are a lot of shots and intimate shots just of the girls and the guys they are with. In the rapping part, the beat is very fast so when filming we will have to keep still shots and close ups of the rapper therefore the cuts will be fast also. We made it very clear in our pitch who the record label is (Sony BMG) as a mainstream record label is right for our mainstream band.